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Comments for stories before and after J, S and C

Joined: 30 Jun 2009, 12:45

17 Aug 2011, 23:35 #1

Here we go Rimara Nui, enjoy. :D
Insane? Me? How dare you make such an assumption!...whadda mean, eating a entire bag of malteasers in one go is bad for your mental health??
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Joined: 20 Jul 2009, 20:23

18 Aug 2011, 06:22 #2

Victory. (BTW, I'm Ria just incase you didn't realise with the name change.)

Edit: Finished reading. I really like Aikane as a character.
"Child of my enemy why have you come? There can be no forgiveness. A father's sins pass to his son." - Gravemind, Halo 3

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Joined: 30 Jun 2009, 12:45

23 Aug 2011, 19:00 #3

Thanks, she's turned out pretty well. Here we go with the second story.
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Joined: 22 Jul 2009, 13:02

23 Aug 2011, 20:21 #4

I'm seeing a distinct progression in ability throughout "the Unique Kraata," and while I feel this progresses into "aIJoMN" (gonna' have to abbreviate that) I can't really place what I think has improved between them.

For instance, at the start of "the Unique Kraata" there's a kind of unquestioning approach to travel around Mata Nui, while (understandably) there's more purpose and in some cases hesitation further on, which might have been appropriate to Sherrie nearer the beginning. From what I can see of "aIJoMN," the transitions seem more... justified?

Anyway, looking forward to more, and I don't think this observation really needs to be taken to heart, seeing as it's been sorted in your newer stories.
It's not illegal, it's just cheating.

I'm into exam time right now... I'll be checking up frequently, but I don't expect to be posting in the next two weeks or so unless something really catches my eye.
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Joined: 30 Jun 2009, 12:45

24 Aug 2011, 20:37 #5

*smiles enigmatically* wait until you see the next story. :D
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Joined: 30 Jun 2009, 12:45

22 Feb 2012, 19:55 #6

Next story's begun. :)
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Joined: 14 Oct 2009, 21:50

02 Mar 2012, 20:45 #7

Just wondering Kokua. (I just got started reading the first post/section on your J,S, and C story) Is ok, you can format it and publish it into google docs? I want to print and read your story outloud (yes outloud. It just makes stories more epic that way) on paper, not on monitor (the light strains my eyes when starring at it too long).

Also, is the J, S, and C story completely finished or is it still in the work in progress?
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Joined: 30 Jun 2009, 12:45

03 Mar 2012, 00:13 #8

Matoro @ Mar 2 2012, 08:45 PM wrote:Just wondering Kokua. (I just got started reading the first post/section on your J,S, and C story) Is ok, you can format it and publish it into google docs? I want to print and read your story outloud (yes outloud. It just makes stories more epic that way) on paper, not on monitor (the light strains my eyes when starring at it too long).

Also, is the J, S, and C story completely finished or is it still in the work in progress?
Er I have no idea how to do that. I'm not that computer savvy. But wow, reading it aloud, I'm deeply flattered you do that, and I know what you mean about reading from a moniter.

J,C and S is now finished, I hadn't realized there'd been a glitch in things as my dongle signal does tend to get stroppy at times.
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Joined: 22 Jul 2009, 13:02

03 Mar 2012, 01:53 #9

You could just select it all, copy/paste it into a word processing document and print that instead. Is there any reason why it has to be Google docs?
It's not illegal, it's just cheating.

I'm into exam time right now... I'll be checking up frequently, but I don't expect to be posting in the next two weeks or so unless something really catches my eye.
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Joined: 14 Oct 2009, 21:50

05 Mar 2012, 04:34 #10

More convenient printing I guess. :/ But I guess I could copy and paste it into a word doc, and do that too.

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Ok finished copying and pasting it onto a word doc. Its about 130 pages with the smallest margins!

Ha! I'm just going to use the school's printer to print out this! Good thing printing is free! I just have to make it less obvious that I am printing 130 pages! Like printing 20 to 30 pages every so often in the lab.

Kokua I could send you the file attachment if you want to look at it on a doc. I don't know how to do it through the forums though.

edit:
Yes! I managed to print double sided - 130 pages without getting caught from the computer lab assistant! :P
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Joined: 22 Jul 2009, 13:02

15 Sep 2014, 22:15 #11

DO MY EYES DECEIVE ME!?

I read over your post, but I have to admit it's been so long since I've read your stories my memory of many of the subplots and interlinking portions are fuzzy at best. Your characterisation is emotive, detailed and intimate as ever, though, and I do hope you're going to post a little more often. It would be incentive to read over your past stories and catch back up again, knowing it's going to be finished at some point.

Hope having another admin on your turf isn't going to cause any trouble, but I shouldn't think so.
It's not illegal, it's just cheating.

I'm into exam time right now... I'll be checking up frequently, but I don't expect to be posting in the next two weeks or so unless something really catches my eye.
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